Cornutt
09.26.03, 10:59 PM
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A Blood Stained Sunrise
The moon is blinding me tonight
And I don't know if I'm all right
The sun will be rising soon
It will come to kill the envious moon
I feel the blood slowing in my veins
My heart is screaming out in pain
Why is this happening to me…
(Chorus)
Cause all I want is to see the sun again
I wasting away, just one more time
I want to see the sun come up
But its going to be a blood stained sunrise
To a blood stained day
I am fading away
I will never see the sun again
I’ll never see the sun again
This must be a mistake
How much more can I take
The world is falling in front of me
If I can make to the sunrise
I might just be OK
But I don't know if its will be a blood stained day
(Chorus) X2
Then a guitar solo.
(Chorus) X2
And an outro.
A Blood Stained Sunrise
The moon is blinding me tonight
And I don't know if I'm all right
The sun will be rising soon
It will come to kill the envious moon
I feel the blood slowing in my veins
My heart is screaming out in pain
Why is this happening to me…
(Chorus)
Cause all I want is to see the sun again
I wasting away, just one more time
I want to see the sun come up
But its going to be a blood stained sunrise
To a blood stained day
I am fading away
I will never see the sun again
I’ll never see the sun again
This must be a mistake
How much more can I take
The world is falling in front of me
If I can make to the sunrise
I might just be OK
But I don't know if its will be a blood stained day
(Chorus) X2
Then a guitar solo.
(Chorus) X2
And an outro.