listen! listen!

[mick_e]

hey everyone
this is my first song ive posted
please listen and tell me what you think
we are an australian band and were 15 years old. this is our third or fourth song we have written.

the song is called at the drags
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/feldsparmusic.htm

make sure you tell me what you think and any improvements
thanx
mick

[rocknroll321]

since this your 4th I'll go easy on you.

For starters its never gonna be great but thats okay you've got plenty of time to get better.

Its pretty much the same thing over and over so try add a few new things here and there.

I'd probably change the lead guitar too, but its your song and you can do what you want with it.

Add some lyrics and post it again so I can really see what was going on.

[gottajibboo]

i like it. i think your drummer needs to settle down just a little though. do you have a singer??

[mick_e]

thax

well we do have a singer but we havent written any lyrics yet but we were thinking of keeping it instrumental. this isnt our best song i dont think but this is the only one i have got on the computer