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Bad Johnny
07.17.03, 2:53 AM
Ok, let me get some constructive critisism for this R&B track that me (E-Dub) and my boy Jackson are going to record.

(intro-spoken smooth voice)
yeah girl, i be seein' you shake that thang on tha dance floor, mm, you know all i wanna do is slap yo face with my alabama black snake, so make sho you holla back, you know wut i'm sayin'? cuz i'm a thug, tru to tha style, make it woth yo while, so check it out

(ooooohhooooooohhh yeaaaaah - 18 syllables)

(verse 1- singing)
yeah baby, i wanna get up in yooooou
roll in my escalade, wut you wanna do?
drinkin E&J, put it in yo glass (spoken- yeah biotch)
what you talkin bout? i wanna slap yo ass

(chorus)
cuz i'm just a thug
can a thug get some luvin?
i'm just a playa tryin to make you mine
girl you stank
go and wash yo ass
or we ain't never gonna wine and dine OOOOOOOOOOHHHH

(verse 2- singing again)
girl let me tell you what i'm gonna do
me and my homies gonna get you drunk (spoken- s h i t yeeeah)
then when you're passed out, we gonna run tha train
what you think of that, bitch ass punk?
but don't get mad girl, i don't want no drama
you ain't gon' be my baby's momma
and when you wake up, girl I don't want no hug
cuz I'm a straight up m u t h a f u c k i n thug

(repeat chorus)

(Bridge- spoken word by Jackson)
yeah, these bitches be tryin to fade us, f u c k up tha game and s h i t, well my man E-Dub's got something to say to their asses right about now, so E-Dub, FOOL, whatcha gotta SAY!!

(Rap break- E-Dub)
Yo, check this out, I got the mad clout
bitches be tryin to empty my wallet out
you buy now, only 10,000 won
bitch brush yo teeth, i'm on a ho marathon
i don't wanna know yo name, just let me run my game
don't be tryin to steal a homie's fame
cuz if you piss me off, I'm 'a tro it in yo ass
you know why? osan gives me gas

(repeat chorus)

Clayton38
07.17.03, 3:07 AM
Dude, this is great stuff... I would have never expected this out of Korea!

Bad Johnny
07.17.03, 3:19 AM
I'm not korean, I'm a G.I.

TheGrinnan
07.17.03, 9:02 PM
Originally posted by Bad Johnny
i wanna get up in yooooou

"I'm all up in you" is my favorite line sexish/****ish line ever.