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Bad Johnny
07.17.03, 2:59 AM
Ok, here's another one. It's gonna be a cat song. What I mean by that is that it's gonna sound like Creed, Pearl Jam, and all the other "YEAH" bands. You know what I'm talking about! Ok here it is.....


(intro) oooohh yyeeaaaaaa non no non no no ohhhh yeah

(verse 1)
And I said yeah, it's been a long time comin'
this song will have your ass hummin' babeeayea
glorified by my jesus christ pose
i water my lawn with a garden hose yeeeah

(chorus)
ooh yeahaaa noo nooooooooooooooo yeaaaaaahhhh hwuah Yesssiirreeee bob
meow meeowww oh yeah babyea ShlimyYabaDoo dee doo yeah yeyeye

(verse 2)
baby you've forsaken meeeaah
but it don't matter, i'm on MTV
we're gonna tour all around the globe-ah
i'll be on stage with my jesus robe-yeahaah
can't you see, it's all about me
i make this money so easily
now that i'm a huge rock star
PRS is making me a signature guitar YEAAHAA

(repeat chorus, only more catish)

(bridge)
random cat babbling

(single string guitar solo, perhaps some piano in the mix)

(repeat chorus)

Clayton38
07.17.03, 3:06 AM
Sounds awesome bro. Random cat babbling? I want to hear that.

All I Fear
07.17.03, 9:55 AM
sounds interesting. i wouldnt post songs online unless there copyrighted tho. i dont think anyone here would steal them, but you cant be too careful.

for anyone who doesnt know, to copyright a song put the lyrics, music, and maybe a recording of the song in an envelope, and mail it to yourself. then keep it unopened on a shelf somewhere.

its not a real copyright, but if someone steals your song, it will count as proof of who wrote it and when (the postmark thing confirms the date).

Wayjurn
07.17.03, 10:16 AM
Originally posted by Bad Johnny
glorified by my jesus christ pose
i water my lawn with a garden hose yeeeah


LOL :rolleyes:

rybread1969
07.17.03, 10:37 AM
Originally posted by Bad Johnny

glorified by my jesus christ pose
i water my lawn with a garden hose yeeeah

(chorus)
meow meeowww oh yeah babyea ShlimyYabaDoo dee doo yeah yeyeye

(verse 2)
i'll be on stage with my jesus robe-yeahaah
PRS is making me a signature guitar YEAAHAA

(repeat chorus, only more catish)

(bridge)
random cat babbling

Hopefully this was your intention...but all of this stuff made me laugh out loud. I like it. I'd buy it. I'm a fan. Keep rockin'.

.:NV:.
07.17.03, 11:58 AM
Originally posted by All I Fear
sounds interesting. i wouldnt post songs online unless there copyrighted tho. i dont think anyone here would steal them, but you cant be too careful.

for anyone who doesnt know, to copyright a song put the lyrics, music, and maybe a recording of the song in an envelope, and mail it to yourself. then keep it unopened on a shelf somewhere.

its not a real copyright, but if someone steals your song, it will count as proof of who wrote it and when (the postmark thing confirms the date).

actually when you write something online or submit something online it is copywritten. just like if some one writes a review strictly for online sites it is copy written as soon as it is posted or "published".

when you go to webpages and see little pieces or graphic work , even though it is not copy written (doesnt say it ANYWHERE ON THE PAGE) it is still the artists work and cannot be used in any way for financial or reputable gain with out consent from the author.

aw the things you learn as a programmer... I need to step away from the computer...

Bad Johnny
07.18.03, 2:31 AM
The only reason I have these lyrics is because me and my friend are going to do an album but we have writer's block, so were gonna warm things up with a few spoofs. This song is a cheap shot at Creed and all the other cat bands of the world. The R&B song is making fun of people like R. Kelly and stuff like that. I just wanted to make some people laugh.:D

Ice age coming
08.10.03, 2:16 PM
hahaha now thats what i call a funny lyric :D

sorre
08.10.03, 5:58 PM
i'd call nick olivieri as a guest to scream it out... it should work perfectly...

gottajibboo
08.11.03, 7:58 AM
why are they called 'cat' bands?

Bad Johnny
08.11.03, 8:40 AM
because they say "yeah" so much that it started to sound like a "Meow." like the guys from tantric and creed, they're all like "yeeeaaah o no no no no yeaaaaha meoww yeah"

skip tracer
08.18.03, 9:23 PM
Kinda like the song at the end of Baseketball: "now you're a mao, a mao mao..now you're a mao, an M-A-N mao"

Bad Johnny
08.19.03, 2:33 AM
I thought that was from orgazmo.

jpd2003
08.20.03, 9:01 PM
Dont hate on mark tremonti just because he doesnt play those damn 5 minute guitar solos, thats what sucks, people who overdo solos and try to sqeeze more than enough notes in their time thats alloted to them. Besides Il bet you and everyone else who gives a damn about all the lead stuff play one scale with everysong you play. You know one scale and thats all. Just like any other 80s music you listen to. They have one good lead that lasts for 5 seconds, then they prolong it for 15 minutes by dropping and raising octaves. Its just that simple