What thinkest thou?

[Alecto]

Here are some recent lyrics. Tell me what you think. Be honest, I can take it!;)

My Dark Half

(Verse#1)
Another day, the gray masquerade, carving out the face we wear
Take our place, the stone parade, pretend we're safe, suffocate
Fingers flex, crow girl recollects
Break your face, touching grace

(Chorus)
Join the dance, with my dark half
Repelled, entranced with my dark half
Terror relapse, the raven laughs

(Verse#2)
Oracle, python bites its tail, hate is too easy, learn to forgive
Weakened flesh, feel so frail, die to ourselves if we wish to live
Blood of Cain, Change is pain
Grow when we embrace the strange

[Ice age coming]

Originally posted by Alecto
Here are some recent lyrics. Tell me what you think. Be honest, I can take it!;)

My Dark Half

(Verse#1)
Another day, the gray masquerade, carving out the face we wear
Take our place, the stone parade, pretend we're safe, suffocate
Fingers flex, crow girl recollects
Break your face, touching grace

(Chorus)
Join the dance, with my dark half
Repelled, entranced with my dark half
Terror relapse, the raven laughs

(Verse#2)
Oracle, python bites its tail, hate is too easy, learn to forgive
Weakened flesh, feel so frail, die to ourselves if we wish to live
Blood of Cain, Change is pain
Grow when we embrace the strange

I think its very hard to judge a lyric when you cant hear how it is attached to the melody etc...

but it looks good.

[thetikiman]

I get a lot of it, but essentially what is it about ?

[Alecto]

Originally posted by thetikiman
I get a lot of it, but essentially what is it about ?

I'm going to be deliberately vague on this one. ;) This is a song my subconscious spontaneously spat up, so I'm not going to second-guess it. However I have been grinding through Bulfinch's Mythology and Man and His Symbols, so there's a lot of that in there. :cool: